Honestly I liked it. The sex may have been tame (by some standards) but it was there to show the emotion of the characters not to simply titillate the reader. This isn't a scene where you can insert just any two characters and make it work. That is what makes a good sex scene IMO. You did a very good job on this. You have me wondering about the characters and what happend before or comes next.
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Date: 2009-11-08 05:40 am (UTC)