"Jo knows she could open her eyes and try to convince him to stay, but really, would it do any good? Wouldn't it only hurt more once she fought her damnedest and he left anyway? With a single breath, she makes her decision. And she waits and waits and waits, staying painfully still. She waits for the door to open. And she waits for the feel of the early morning mist to flood the room and rush over her skin."
This was the most heartbreakingly beautiful paragraph of the whole story. I think the sex scence was tastefully written and you used the right words to catch the emotions between them th at you were going for. I'm now all teery eyed and weepy (my dad's giving me an odd look as he sits on the couch and I sniffle lol) and I'm supposed go write my second Christmas fic *shakes head* haha I should have waited to read this cause I feeling all emotional for Jo and now I have to go write her happy. *sigh*
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Date: 2009-12-25 01:51 am (UTC)This was the most heartbreakingly beautiful paragraph of the whole story. I think the sex scence was tastefully written and you used the right words to catch the emotions between them th at you were going for. I'm now all teery eyed and weepy (my dad's giving me an odd look as he sits on the couch and I sniffle lol) and I'm supposed go write my second Christmas fic *shakes head* haha I should have waited to read this cause I feeling all emotional for Jo and now I have to go write her happy. *sigh*
Great Job with this! :-D
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